问题描述：
英语短文,请高手们帮我看看语法有没有错误地方
这是一篇是我自己写的简单自我介绍,请高手们帮我看看语法有没有错误地方,
Good evening everybody.Allow me to introduce myself.
I'm from Guangzhou.
My name is Xujiahui
I'm an automobile industry quality control staff
I like to play badminton,I hope everybody with me can play one game
The above is brief myself introduction,thank you for your listening.Thanks
这是一篇是我自己写的简单自我介绍,请高手们帮我看看语法有没有错误地方,
Good evening everybody.Allow me to introduce myself.
I'm from Guangzhou.
My name is Xujiahui
I'm an automobile industry quality control staff
I like to play badminton,I hope everybody with me can play one game
The above is brief myself introduction,thank you for your listening.Thanks
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