求 英语作文,字数不少于80.

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求 英语作文,字数不少于80.
贿赂一直以来的一种生活方式.
下面是谷歌的翻译,大家看看有没有语法的错误,
Now,bribery has become a part of life.He has become a part of our lives naturally has his reasons.Now,we get to his advantage.We can encounter difficulties in our time by means of bribery to resolve difficulties.Bribery can also speed up the time of our success.And so on.
Bribery is a good personal terms.However,for society?
The rich can bribe to provide chips for the success.So no money for people?Therefore,bribery is not for the poor to fair.This continues,the poor will get poorer,the rich richer.This is a vicious circle.So I do not advocate bribery
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Nowadays,bribery has become a part of life(前后都用a part of life会有点重复感,可以改一下).
It has become a part of our life(our是复数,不用加s,但前面用life最好跟返) naturally.
It is strongly believe that there are some advantages(his advantage贿赂不是人,不应该用HIS).
Bribery can solve some problems easily,when we encounter difficulties in daily life.
However,is it good for society too?(for society这有点口语化)
How about the poor?(no money for people不等于穷人)
Therefore,bribery is not fair of the poor.
the poor will get poorer,the rich richer(这句有点怪,但不懂改)
这些纯个人知识,有可能有些不对.
不过,网上的翻译通常较中文化,和较少句子结构
 
 
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