英语翻译我叫XX,来自中国,今年18岁了,我英文不好,所以我正在学习英语,我的兴趣是听音乐,游泳,希望和大家相处愉快2楼

Hey everyone, I am XX, 18, from China. As you probably would see later on, I am not that good in English, but I am trying my best to improve it. Maybe you can give me a hand on that. I like music and swimming. Hope we can get along well together.
基本按你的中文原意了.在英语能力那里我稍微改了下,稍微轻松略带调侃自己的口吻,--“或许你们以后会发现,我英文不好,不过我很努力在提高了.或许你们在这方面可以帮我一下.” 显得比较谦虚而且比较合群的感觉.
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我能提个建议么.年龄还是不要说了吧.老外不是那么喜欢被问或者习惯问别人年龄的,多认为年龄是个人隐私的一部分.我觉得年纪无关紧要~~~
如果觉得你的自我介绍太短,可以加一些对这个地方的印象啊什么的.