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In some cuntries,teenagers have jobs while they are still student,so,lots of peoples ave different opinion.
someone think it is bad,because you have part-time job effect you school work,but some people think that make part-time job is well,and I support part-time job when you are a student..
First,work part time will improve your ability,this includes your deal with affairs and social work,so you will get abundant soical experence.It is one hand.On the other hand,the social work experence will help your university life,for example,you will take it easy when you deal with a diffcult problem.of cause,as a student,we should study hard,on this permise,we're work part time will improve to our.
second,I think students shoun't seek some a lot of work of diffcult,because it myay be a burden to you,this s dreadful!so if you have part time,you can becme a part-timetutor or work in the library or shops..
All in all,as long as it doesn't affect the school work,I agree and support students have part-time jobs.
英语渣,意志强的帮下忙,修改下错误.------------------------------------------------------------------
In some cuntries,teenagers have jobs while they are still student,so,lots of peoples ave different opinion.
someone think it is bad,because you have part-time job effect you school work,but some people think that make part-time job is well,and I support part-time job when you are a student..
First,work part time will improve your ability,this includes your deal with affairs and social work,so you will get abundant soical experence.It is one hand.On the other hand,the social work experence will help your university life,for example,you will take it easy when you deal with a diffcult problem.of cause,as a student,we should study hard,on this permise,we're work part time will improve to our.
second,I think students shoun't seek some a lot of work of diffcult,because it myay be a burden to you,this s dreadful!so if you have part time,you can becme a part-timetutor or work in the library or shops..
All in all,as long as it doesn't affect the school work,I agree and support students have part-time jobs.
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