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In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags were (was) used by people (to person) extensively,especially those (people) who buy(ing) things in
supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags being (was)
thrown away everywhere ,(and it will cause) thus causing the White Pollution
.And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so they (it) will remain (leave) in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly
,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when they have too (it is) many (1).
As the plastic bags created (takes) more and more problems,our government
made(make) a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags(2).As far as
I am concerned (For my part),I think the action can bring (take) many benefits
to people (person) .To begin with ,it will reduce the production (product)
of disposable plastic bags and as the price increases (increased),people
will control their desire of using them (use it).In addition ,it can protect
better both our environment (better) and (ensure) our health.In short (a word),it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.
(1)或when there are too many.
(2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?
如果还未能
As the plastic bags have created more and more problems,our government
will pass a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.