纠正一下楼上的,many可以直接接people,不用加of.When I was young后面不应该用sing而应该用sang,as soon as后面接going或者改成as soon as I went to bed.最后一句出现了语法错误,my mother and my father后面应该加and而非is.
我再来凑个热闹
I am a person who is very interested in music.My best pop singer is Jay Chou.His songs always sounds wonderful.When he was unknown, he worked hard to create good songs.I admire him for his hardwork.
My parents like music,too.But their favourite singers are old and unfashionable.We all think music is the best way to rest and relax.We all love music.
