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Today,I brought my friends to visit my uncle's farm.After an hour's journey by bus,we arrived at the farm ,which is in a small valley around the moutains.The farm is about two hundred thousand square meters.On our arrival,my uncle gave us a warmly reception and showed us round the farm.There were golen rice everywhere,indicating a good harvest.Uncle was hospitable and we had lunch on the farm.In the afternoon,while we were visiting the Shed of Sunlight Greenhouse,uncle introduced it to us very carefully.During the visit,we felt we were very close to the nature.
After an one-day trip,we returned at four in the afternoon,happily.
顺便可以帮我看看有哪些写的不对的，比如语法，单词。
Today,I brought my friends to visit my uncle's farm.After an hour's journey by bus,we arrived at the farm ,which is in a small valley around the moutains.The farm is about two hundred thousand square meters.On our arrival,my uncle gave us a warmly reception and showed us round the farm.There were golen rice everywhere,indicating a good harvest.Uncle was hospitable and we had lunch on the farm.In the afternoon,while we were visiting the Shed of Sunlight Greenhouse,uncle introduced it to us very carefully.During the visit,we felt we were very close to the nature.
After an one-day trip,we returned at four in the afternoon,happily.
顺便可以帮我看看有哪些写的不对的，比如语法，单词。
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