你应该说明这篇作文是什么考试的作文,都有什么具体要求?我看你要求的字数在一百字以内,应该是中学作文,我就按中学水平写几句吧.
文章第一段写刘翔的个人信息,第二段是刘翔的经历,第三段是你为什么喜欢他.
Liu Xiang was born in 1983 in Shanghai,China.It is widely ackownledged that he is one of the most famous athletes all over the world.Besides,he is the pride of we Chinese.
Liu Xiang is a brilliant athlete.He is good at the 110-meter hurdles.He practices hard in order to realise his dreams.In 2004 Olympic Games,Liu Xiang became the champion of male 110m hurdles.He becomes the focus of people all across our country.
As we all know,Liu Xiang is an active guy.He is handsome,clever and
humorous.I love Liu Xiang and I am a fun of Liu Xiang.I hope that he can make a good progress in the futher.
估计应该符合你的要求,不用修改,可以直接上交.老师应该看不出来是找人代笔的.看我打了这么半天,你要记得给我加积分哦
