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那个.原文如下.如有错误,情指正,
Ladies and gentlemen ,thank you.Today my topic is”Act responsibly and in my heart,expensive line of civilization”.
Civilized city means building a well-off society in the country.Socialist modernization construction of a new stage of development,economic and all-round progress in various social undertakings,material civilization,political civilization and spiritual civilization in the coordinated development of spiritual civilization construction has made remarkable achievements.Members of the public the overall quality and a higher degree of civilization city.National civilized city the title of the whole city are reflected in the level of civilization of China's comprehensive Honor.So we must have perseverance to do what we can do and what we should do to help our huaibei to be more civilizable?
For example we should keep our enviromrnt sanitary by No smoking and No littering.We should observe the traffic rule,and refuse rushing the red light.we also can call upon no no vulgarity.On the bus ,It is our duty to offer your seat to the elderly and pregnant women.On the public occasion ,it is our onus to queue up.All of these is civilized activities,
.If we try our best to do it,we can see the blue sky being cleaner,we can see our home is more beautiful,we can see the traffic is more convinent we can see the people in our city is more friendly.we can see our city is more civilizable.we can see the wold is more perfect!
let us shouting ,let us believing ,let us observe “Act responsibly and in my heart,expensive line of civilization”let us create a better future!
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那个.原文如下.如有错误,情指正,
Ladies and gentlemen ,thank you.Today my topic is”Act responsibly and in my heart,expensive line of civilization”.
Civilized city means building a well-off society in the country.Socialist modernization construction of a new stage of development,economic and all-round progress in various social undertakings,material civilization,political civilization and spiritual civilization in the coordinated development of spiritual civilization construction has made remarkable achievements.Members of the public the overall quality and a higher degree of civilization city.National civilized city the title of the whole city are reflected in the level of civilization of China's comprehensive Honor.So we must have perseverance to do what we can do and what we should do to help our huaibei to be more civilizable?
For example we should keep our enviromrnt sanitary by No smoking and No littering.We should observe the traffic rule,and refuse rushing the red light.we also can call upon no no vulgarity.On the bus ,It is our duty to offer your seat to the elderly and pregnant women.On the public occasion ,it is our onus to queue up.All of these is civilized activities,
.If we try our best to do it,we can see the blue sky being cleaner,we can see our home is more beautiful,we can see the traffic is more convinent we can see the people in our city is more friendly.we can see our city is more civilizable.we can see the wold is more perfect!
let us shouting ,let us believing ,let us observe “Act responsibly and in my heart,expensive line of civilization”let us create a better future!
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