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two days ago,my little dog jesse died.
jesse had been in my family for almost four months,she was a very cute and smart dog,she had a big head and eyes of pure.jesse was labrador retriever,so she was naughty and lively,she accompanied me to spend a pleasant time.
but now,she is gone.
jesse,i am so sorry.i shouldn't had left you alone at home that day,i thought when i went home,you will still be as happy as usual in the cage and wait for me to play with you ,i thought you will stay with me safely and happyily forever,i thought i can watch you grow up every day.there are so many things i haven't done with you,Why do you suddenly left me?
jesse,will you know my name if i saw you in heaven?will you still remember me?
jesse,my darlin.i miss you so much.
有错的请大家指出来~我总感觉时态用错了
two days ago,my little dog jesse died.
jesse had been in my family for almost four months,she was a very cute and smart dog,she had a big head and eyes of pure.jesse was labrador retriever,so she was naughty and lively,she accompanied me to spend a pleasant time.
but now,she is gone.
jesse,i am so sorry.i shouldn't had left you alone at home that day,i thought when i went home,you will still be as happy as usual in the cage and wait for me to play with you ,i thought you will stay with me safely and happyily forever,i thought i can watch you grow up every day.there are so many things i haven't done with you,Why do you suddenly left me?
jesse,will you know my name if i saw you in heaven?will you still remember me?
jesse,my darlin.i miss you so much.
有错的请大家指出来~我总感觉时态用错了
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