父母英文担保信写的对不对?求修改!

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父母英文担保信写的对不对?求修改!
是签证用的,我照着模板自己写的,估计问题多多,麻烦高手批改纠正!
To:Spain Embassy
Dear Sir or Madam:
We are the applicant XXX’s parents,Mr.A and Mrs.B.
In order to let XXX can have a pleasant trip,We are willing to provide our savings RMB30,0000 and three houses to support our daughter.We guarantee that our daughter XXX will have no economic difficulties in Europe and obey the laws and regulations.We are willing to bear all the responsibility if any problems happen.
Please give kind consideration to our daughter XXX’s visa application.
Best regards!
We hereby to guarantee!
Signature:_______
Date:_______
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-21

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没有什么大问题啦,水平还不错,我只看语法问题哦,至于内容,我也不清楚可以不可以.
我找出来的有以下几点小问题:
In order to let XXX can have a pleasant trip
这个地方要改成:In order to let XXX have a pleasant trip (要去掉can )
We are willing to provide our savings
这个地方,we首字母要改成小写的
另外,bear responsibility,个人觉得改成take responsibility比较好,总觉得用bear有一种被动承受的感觉,take更加主动.
希望有签证经验的高手再提一些别的意见吧!
 
 
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