英语句子请帮忙纠错!I pray to god,for the girl whom i love,I hope she

I prayed to God,for the girl I love.I hope she would be happy for her whole life.
pray--prayed过去时吧,感觉比较好.
God,首字母要大写,“上帝”
the girl I love更简略也地道些
for her whold life/for all her life才是对的,whole跟all的用法是不一样的
I hope前面要改成句号,或者分号.这杨句子才是正确的.