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Transform into a white swan
Up to the present,the huge success of the Danish author Hans Christian Andersen’s fairy tales showed no sign of abating.Though I have been grown up,the fascinating stories still appeal to me.
The ugly duckling,written by Andersen,is my favorite.It tells of an ugly duckling who has experienced many tribulations.In the end,reflected in the transparent water,he saw below him his own image——he was no longer a clumsy dark gray bird,ugly and ungainly,but a beautiful white swan.
When I was very young,mum told me the story of the ugly duckling.
“You didn’t sound surprised when I told you the ending.” Mum said,“So I realized it is easy for you to be negative about the terrible things.Everyone wants to live a happy life,but you have to know that frustrations,failures,and sometimes stumbling attempts at growth and progress are necessary.The key factor is you should have your own dream,and try your best to work out.”
Ugly duckling illustrated,many tribulations into a white swan,it is because it has a dream of mind.It supports dream.In fact,no trajectory fate lies in the realm of beautiful,beautiful pursuit of ideals.The frustration and pain of life is inevitable,we should learn to walk the feet.Everyone will have a dream of their own,as long as they learn to establish life goals,self-confidence,self-improvement,Independence grow up,they will really struggle through the original can also become aware of their "white swan" like the ugly duckling can achieve the same dream in the heart.The ugly duckling was hatched from an egg to the large,ugly,and no one like him,many ducks and animals were bullied.He has no choice but to stay away from his father and mother,stray alone,encountered stormy weather…… but ugly duckling no fear,he fought tenaciously,study hard…… end of the day,people suddenly discover that the world's most ugly duckling into a beautiful white swan!He has his own dream,but the dream has to go through hard work and struggle,and it based on a pure soul.The same is true with a person.A person whose soul is so pure as to be free from any pollution actually represents a profundity that tugs at people’s heartstrings.
This story is such an important part of my childhood that it has even influenced my entire life.I should carry on,and listen last to my own heart.I realize that I am the only one responsible for my life,the only person who can revolutionize my life.Because I know myself better than anyone on earth,my life will change when I change.
As is known to everyone,life wouldn’t be easy.I just promise that it would be worth it,so I will always stay on my own track.
Transform into a white swan
Up to the present,the huge success of the Danish author Hans Christian Andersen’s fairy tales showed no sign of abating.Though I have been grown up,the fascinating stories still appeal to me.
The ugly duckling,written by Andersen,is my favorite.It tells of an ugly duckling who has experienced many tribulations.In the end,reflected in the transparent water,he saw below him his own image——he was no longer a clumsy dark gray bird,ugly and ungainly,but a beautiful white swan.
When I was very young,mum told me the story of the ugly duckling.
“You didn’t sound surprised when I told you the ending.” Mum said,“So I realized it is easy for you to be negative about the terrible things.Everyone wants to live a happy life,but you have to know that frustrations,failures,and sometimes stumbling attempts at growth and progress are necessary.The key factor is you should have your own dream,and try your best to work out.”
Ugly duckling illustrated,many tribulations into a white swan,it is because it has a dream of mind.It supports dream.In fact,no trajectory fate lies in the realm of beautiful,beautiful pursuit of ideals.The frustration and pain of life is inevitable,we should learn to walk the feet.Everyone will have a dream of their own,as long as they learn to establish life goals,self-confidence,self-improvement,Independence grow up,they will really struggle through the original can also become aware of their "white swan" like the ugly duckling can achieve the same dream in the heart.The ugly duckling was hatched from an egg to the large,ugly,and no one like him,many ducks and animals were bullied.He has no choice but to stay away from his father and mother,stray alone,encountered stormy weather…… but ugly duckling no fear,he fought tenaciously,study hard…… end of the day,people suddenly discover that the world's most ugly duckling into a beautiful white swan!He has his own dream,but the dream has to go through hard work and struggle,and it based on a pure soul.The same is true with a person.A person whose soul is so pure as to be free from any pollution actually represents a profundity that tugs at people’s heartstrings.
This story is such an important part of my childhood that it has even influenced my entire life.I should carry on,and listen last to my own heart.I realize that I am the only one responsible for my life,the only person who can revolutionize my life.Because I know myself better than anyone on earth,my life will change when I change.
As is known to everyone,life wouldn’t be easy.I just promise that it would be worth it,so I will always stay on my own track.
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