问题描述：
高手帮我看看这英文日记有什么问题
918
Today is a unusual day.
78 years ago Japan invaders attacked the China city of shenyang.Since then,Chinese people endured 14 years of suffering.Japan invaders took away a numerous of wealth of China,killed millions of people in our motherland...This is history,but it still alerts us that we can't seek the comfort,we must strengthen ourselves.
Of course,Japan is a developed country and we use their technology frequently,so,we also have to learn a lot from Japan,this reflects our breast.
918,my fellow citizens,don't cry...
语法、时态、用词之类等都行，最好能再给我个建议什么的，
918
Today is a unusual day.
78 years ago Japan invaders attacked the China city of shenyang.Since then,Chinese people endured 14 years of suffering.Japan invaders took away a numerous of wealth of China,killed millions of people in our motherland...This is history,but it still alerts us that we can't seek the comfort,we must strengthen ourselves.
Of course,Japan is a developed country and we use their technology frequently,so,we also have to learn a lot from Japan,this reflects our breast.
918,my fellow citizens,don't cry...
语法、时态、用词之类等都行，最好能再给我个建议什么的，
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