初二英语作文：my future

My Future
I want to be a doctor in the future.When people are hurt ,I can help them.
I like helping people.I also think that being a doctor is a good job to make money.I want to live in Brijing.It's a big city.
My dream is to live with my parents in future.I want to own happiness in my life.
再问： 最后一段能改一下吗？
再答： I want to be a rich man and do what I like. I believe myself.