英语作文 write a paragraph about yourself

sample1
My name is .I am years old .I like learning English very much ,because English can enjoy myself in my live and I can talk with foreigners in English.My hobby is swimming in summer and reading book.this is me!thank you!i hope you can know better about me,thank you!
sample 2
Hello,everyone.First of all,let me make a brief self-introduction.Iam No.xx candidate,I come from Weifang,**years old,and i like dancing and painting,I think I will learn more knowledge in this game.I hope that everyone will like me and support me .That's all my introduction.Thanks