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请英语好的来剖析一下小生七年级的英语作文语法错误
中文：我盼望着去北京爬长城,我的愿望终于要实现了
本周末我们全家打算去爬长城,将在那儿呆两天；我们将坐火车去,乘飞机回来.
我打算拍一些美景,妈妈打算带一些吃的、喝的东西.此刻我们在做准备.
英文：I'm looking forward to Beijing climb the Great Wall,I wish finally to achieve
This weekend we family plan to go to the Great Wall,will stay there for two days; We will go by train,fly back.
I'm going to take some beauty,mom going to take some food,something to drink.Now we in preparation.
中文：我盼望着去北京爬长城,我的愿望终于要实现了
本周末我们全家打算去爬长城,将在那儿呆两天；我们将坐火车去,乘飞机回来.
我打算拍一些美景,妈妈打算带一些吃的、喝的东西.此刻我们在做准备.
英文：I'm looking forward to Beijing climb the Great Wall,I wish finally to achieve
This weekend we family plan to go to the Great Wall,will stay there for two days; We will go by train,fly back.
I'm going to take some beauty,mom going to take some food,something to drink.Now we in preparation.
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