Dear XX,
Thank you very much for your great hospitality and receiving during my stay in England in this summer vacation which might have brought you about inconveniences.Britain was so beautiful and the weather there was so good that I really enjoyed my trip.I hope to see you all again in the next summer vacation.
本段稍微在语句组织上有先后顺序颠倒,中国人习惯是说打扰了不好意思,而外国人写信是先表示感谢,所以我在译的时候根据外国人的习惯,先表示了谢意,再略提了该暑假在英国的逗留可能给你们添麻烦了.另外,英国很漂亮、天气很好先说,再说由于这两个原因我真的过得很开心,并希望下次再见,是这么一个逻辑,特此说明.
By the way,Backy and I both observed the agreement.We didn't unpack your presents until we returned to China.Woo,what wonderful presents you sent to us - Harry Potter,such a wonderful series of books in English.Although there are lots of words that we can not comprehend at present,we will make efforts to read them.Thank you very much for the presents.
这一段翻译基本忠于原文,逻辑与英文无多大差异.
Yours Sincerely,
XXX
最开始的称呼后最后的署名还是一定需要的,这是一封书信不可或缺的要素.
