语法没问题,意思有问题. with the stars up in the sky 作状语,修饰谓语 am missing,但跟谓语又毫无关系,意思很别扭.如果你想表达：星星布满天,而我在想你,不需要用 with,直接简单地写成：The stars are up in the sky,and I'm missing you.或 The stars up in the sky reminds me of you.或 Seeing the stars up in the sky,I start to miss you.
