In addition,unlike the traditional letter,e-mail is delivered in an invisible virtual way,avoiding human errors in the process of reorganizing and delivering.
再问： 我是想表达“避免了人为的失误”这个意思，用avoiding的话会不会就没有已经避免了的意思呢？还有啊，从avoid开始后面半句话是不是有点中式英语的感觉呢？
再答： hi. it is a resultant participle clause. A resultant participle clause comes after the main clause, introducing an action that is the immediate result of the action th the main clause. e.g.The car hit the roadside, killing the driver immediately. (因) 汽車撞了路邊，(果)司機立刻殺死。(google translate)
再问： 恩，谢谢，重新修改了一遍句子，再帮我看看吧，对了，主要看一下有没有很chinglish，或者还有什么错误！ In addition, unlike the traditional paper letter, e-mail is delivered on the internet through an invisible virtual way, avoiding human errors of dropping some letters in the process of reorganizing and delivering. 这里用on the internet 可以不？
再答： letter (http://english.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/letter) meaning: 2 a written, typed, or printed communication, sent in an envelope ------paper 一字是多餘了 error: meaning: 1. (~in sth/ in doing sth) a mistake e.g. There's an error in your calculation. 你計算中有個錯誤。 .....avoiding human error in dropping some letters.... 避免 遺失一些信件上 有人為錯誤？？？（ 遺失一些信件本身就是錯誤） avoiding human errors in the process of organizing and delivering. 避免 整理和傳遞的過程中的人為錯誤 (這不是包括了 "遺失一些信件" 嗎?) human error ( no "s") == a mistake made by a person rather than by a machine In addition, unlike the traditional paper letter, e-mail is delivered on the internet in an invisible virtual way, avoiding human error in the process of reorganizing and delivering.
