帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?

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帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
真心希望能指出我为什么那样写是错的,犯了什么语法错误
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-15

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designed 和 released是过去分词;ranking 是现在分词 都是非谓语动词,单独不作谓语.句子缺少谓语
Angry Birds,( was ) designed by Jackke Lisalo and released ( in )December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
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Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released in December,2009,ranks the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
 
 
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