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What discovery in the last 100 years has been
most beneficial for people in you country Use
specific reaso nand examples to support your choice.
The recet years have seen the profound changes of people’s daily lives lifestyle,during which a growing number of people cars for their daily transportations.Meanwhile,still some use bicycle for their trafic tools .I believe that the most useful things for people in the last 100 years is car.
The cars ,which enchance the efficiency of people’s working.About a hundred year ago the cars had not been popular ,people had to spent a great nunber of time in going to work ,dating ,tarvelling on the way .The recent 100 years the technological development has improved much faster.The cars ,which is much easier to buy ,are very popular now .We can economize the time on working ,out-door picnics etc .
The cars are not only efficient but also convenient for the modern people .
A great number of convenience has been seen as the cars created .We can drive it wherever we want to go .A good ecample is that ,I am a poor person who didn’t own a car when I was the beginning of my career .I had to get up early so that I can catch up the firstly empty bus everyday which sent me to the right place .sometimes I had to wait for a few minutes ,a quarter or even worse.As time went by ,I finally possessed my own car which is very cheap.It change my life and meant that I didn’t have to be controled .I can drive it to work ,to travel ,to do everythings I would like .
To understand the advantages of cars which have mentioned above ,we can still realize that cars always bring joys to us .We can go for a picnic,by using the car where we see our family’s smile to us and enjoy the meaningful holiday.
From that has been discussed above ,we may safely draw the conclusion that cars are the most useful things in my country.
What discovery in the last 100 years has been
most beneficial for people in you country Use
specific reaso nand examples to support your choice.
The recet years have seen the profound changes of people’s daily lives lifestyle,during which a growing number of people cars for their daily transportations.Meanwhile,still some use bicycle for their trafic tools .I believe that the most useful things for people in the last 100 years is car.
The cars ,which enchance the efficiency of people’s working.About a hundred year ago the cars had not been popular ,people had to spent a great nunber of time in going to work ,dating ,tarvelling on the way .The recent 100 years the technological development has improved much faster.The cars ,which is much easier to buy ,are very popular now .We can economize the time on working ,out-door picnics etc .
The cars are not only efficient but also convenient for the modern people .
A great number of convenience has been seen as the cars created .We can drive it wherever we want to go .A good ecample is that ,I am a poor person who didn’t own a car when I was the beginning of my career .I had to get up early so that I can catch up the firstly empty bus everyday which sent me to the right place .sometimes I had to wait for a few minutes ,a quarter or even worse.As time went by ,I finally possessed my own car which is very cheap.It change my life and meant that I didn’t have to be controled .I can drive it to work ,to travel ,to do everythings I would like .
To understand the advantages of cars which have mentioned above ,we can still realize that cars always bring joys to us .We can go for a picnic,by using the car where we see our family’s smile to us and enjoy the meaningful holiday.
From that has been discussed above ,we may safely draw the conclusion that cars are the most useful things in my country.
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