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10. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
The debate over whether hard work is the only reason for success has been raging for quite a few years in my country. Many hold the idea that luck also is an important reason for success claim that luck sometimes can help us to avoid troubles. Although this point of view embraces some valid point, I insist that it is because of the hard work that makes people become successful from the aspect of the improvement of the skills and the enrichment of the confidence.
The primary reason is that hard work is able to increase the ability of our own which is important for us to success. For instance, because of the hard work, Li Na, the famous Chinese tennis player, became the champions of a lot of games. Because of the hard work, she can largely increase the ability of playing tennis so that it is easier for her to beat others. Otherwise, if she just relied on the luck, she would not have enough ability to succeed for so many times.
It constitutes another reason for my point of view that hard work can help us to become more confident. Like for me, after playing ping-pong for about 6 years, it is easier for me to win the games in the school. It is 6year's hard work that makes me become so confident which can always help me to success. Hard- working can give us the energy to believe in ourselves, while luck can not.
Admittedly, luck can sometimes help us to get out of trouble. However, we can not get the luck every time. The success which gets because of the luck is not the real success. After working for months and trying for years, such success does belong to our own.
To sum up, from the evidence mentioned above results the natural summary that despite the chances of sometimes work, luck has nothing to do with the real success. Therefore, it is the hard work that is the key of the success.
Word Count: 337
10. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
The debate over whether hard work is the only reason for success has been raging for quite a few years in my country. Many hold the idea that luck also is an important reason for success claim that luck sometimes can help us to avoid troubles. Although this point of view embraces some valid point, I insist that it is because of the hard work that makes people become successful from the aspect of the improvement of the skills and the enrichment of the confidence.
The primary reason is that hard work is able to increase the ability of our own which is important for us to success. For instance, because of the hard work, Li Na, the famous Chinese tennis player, became the champions of a lot of games. Because of the hard work, she can largely increase the ability of playing tennis so that it is easier for her to beat others. Otherwise, if she just relied on the luck, she would not have enough ability to succeed for so many times.
It constitutes another reason for my point of view that hard work can help us to become more confident. Like for me, after playing ping-pong for about 6 years, it is easier for me to win the games in the school. It is 6year's hard work that makes me become so confident which can always help me to success. Hard- working can give us the energy to believe in ourselves, while luck can not.
Admittedly, luck can sometimes help us to get out of trouble. However, we can not get the luck every time. The success which gets because of the luck is not the real success. After working for months and trying for years, such success does belong to our own.
To sum up, from the evidence mentioned above results the natural summary that despite the chances of sometimes work, luck has nothing to do with the real success. Therefore, it is the hard work that is the key of the success.
Word Count: 337
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