英语翻译Part 1 please revise the following sentences so as to ma

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英语翻译
Part 1 please revise the following sentences so as to make them formal and acceptable in business situation.
1.The letter I am writing is about your order for computers.
2.If you don’t improve your service,we will cancel the contract.
3.Come and repair the machine we bought from you last week.
4.We want to have your payment soon.
5.We can’t refund your payment.
6.We can reduce the price for large orders.
7.We strongly ask that you refund at least 10percent of our money.
8.We are extremely sorry that we can not accept the price.
9.I must tell you that you have delayed the payment by two months.
10.I will be very glad if you could pay us before the end of the month.
11.I am not sure if you could come to the worksite on Tuesday morning.
12.I received your letter which informs me of the latest prices of your computers
13.In this letter I’m complaining about your services.
14.We delivered the goods to you three months ago.
The cover of the machine is cracked.Please send us a replacement
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-13

问题解答:

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第一部分:请修改下列句子使他们在商务情况下是正式与可接受的句子.

这信是我写的有关于你电脑订单的

如果你不提高你的服务,我们将会取消合同

来修好这个我们上周在你那买的机器

我们希望你们快点付款

我们不能退回你的付款

我们可以为大订单降价

我们强烈要求你们退回至少10%的付款

我们非常抱歉不能接受这个价格

我必须告诉你你迟付款项两个月

我们会非常高兴你们能在这个月末之前付款

我不能确定你是否能在星期二早晨去工地

我收到你的有关于你电脑最近价格的信

在这信里,我抱怨你的服务

我在三个月之前就发了货物

这机器的包装碰坏了,请给我一个替换品.

上班时间 手工打的 
再问: 是用商务英语翻译上面的句子 不是翻译成汉语 抱歉哦
 
 
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