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When I knew about financial events like the South Sea Bubble and Mississippi Bubble from book for the first fime,I was deeply shocked by the facts that these companies' stock price could abnormally rise so many times more in such a short period and so many people,even intelligent like great Isaac Newton ended in failure in this fanaticism.This experience that opened my eyes to the wide world of Finance.
With curiosity I took a shot at investing stock in 2003,and the result proved that I still have many things to learn about finance.
To find out the reasonable answers haunting in my mind:what factors causes the fluctuation of the stock market; why the stock prices vary every second; what indexes fix the stock prices of different corporations,every week I take certain time to read books and magazines in the fields of finance and economics in the library since 2003,sometimes also read some biographies of relative authors,which make their profound theories looks more cordial and easy to understand to me.
And as a student who received both Associate's degree and Bachelor's degree from Shanghai Sanda University(SSU),one of the best private universities in China,I had a good opportunity in enhancing my knowledge background in fields of finance and Economics.I learned higher mathematics,both macro economics and micro economics,finance,accounting and some other relative courses in my five years college life and always be a frequent visitor to teachers' office.With the continuous communication with teachers,together with a few my classmates I got an opportunity to participate in the translation of the academic articles written by the teacher in International Finance who become the vice-president of our business school and my referee at a later time.
In winter vocation of 2006,I got the internship in Credit Management Department of Shanghai Pudong Development Branch(SPDB),Bank of China; my major responsibility was to assist in making statements,draw charts,and statistics.This experience,for the first time,let me obtain the opportunity in experiencing economic and financial knowledge out of books,and get a further understanding in three aspects:how to implement monetary policy,monitor financial market,and ensure the stability of financial market.This experience attracted me deeply and ignited my desire of taking my career in financial field.
When I knew about financial events like the South Sea Bubble and Mississippi Bubble from book for the first fime,I was deeply shocked by the facts that these companies' stock price could abnormally rise so many times more in such a short period and so many people,even intelligent like great Isaac Newton ended in failure in this fanaticism.This experience that opened my eyes to the wide world of Finance.
With curiosity I took a shot at investing stock in 2003,and the result proved that I still have many things to learn about finance.
To find out the reasonable answers haunting in my mind:what factors causes the fluctuation of the stock market; why the stock prices vary every second; what indexes fix the stock prices of different corporations,every week I take certain time to read books and magazines in the fields of finance and economics in the library since 2003,sometimes also read some biographies of relative authors,which make their profound theories looks more cordial and easy to understand to me.
And as a student who received both Associate's degree and Bachelor's degree from Shanghai Sanda University(SSU),one of the best private universities in China,I had a good opportunity in enhancing my knowledge background in fields of finance and Economics.I learned higher mathematics,both macro economics and micro economics,finance,accounting and some other relative courses in my five years college life and always be a frequent visitor to teachers' office.With the continuous communication with teachers,together with a few my classmates I got an opportunity to participate in the translation of the academic articles written by the teacher in International Finance who become the vice-president of our business school and my referee at a later time.
In winter vocation of 2006,I got the internship in Credit Management Department of Shanghai Pudong Development Branch(SPDB),Bank of China; my major responsibility was to assist in making statements,draw charts,and statistics.This experience,for the first time,let me obtain the opportunity in experiencing economic and financial knowledge out of books,and get a further understanding in three aspects:how to implement monetary policy,monitor financial market,and ensure the stability of financial market.This experience attracted me deeply and ignited my desire of taking my career in financial field.
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