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Last winter I went to the CuiHua Mountain ski resort with my friends.
The snow was falling down on the grand; Mountains were covered by white,when we arrived.The splendid scene I have never seen before.As soon as putted on the snowsuit,we entered in the freshman practice area of the ski resort quickly.After all of us were gathered,our coach began to teaching us the basic skill for how to skiing.She told us how to use the ski sticks,keeping the body balance and protecting us from the clash.
As soon as the Introductions was finished.
I tried to follow her instruction,but it was easy to say but hard to do.I felled down for several times.When I turned around I saw the others were enjoying in the game.I got very angry.So I began to compliant the bad weather and the stupid ground makes me slipped.Tim is my best friends,When I nearly plan to give up,Jim stretched out his hand to me .He held my hand and taught me how to ski for a long time.At last I could do it very well with any help.
Thanks to my friend Tim and my coach.It's a significative day in my lifetimes.When I lose courage and heart I will remember the day.It will give me courage and make me stronger,I believe.
Last winter I went to the CuiHua Mountain ski resort with my friends.
The snow was falling down on the grand; Mountains were covered by white,when we arrived.The splendid scene I have never seen before.As soon as putted on the snowsuit,we entered in the freshman practice area of the ski resort quickly.After all of us were gathered,our coach began to teaching us the basic skill for how to skiing.She told us how to use the ski sticks,keeping the body balance and protecting us from the clash.
As soon as the Introductions was finished.
I tried to follow her instruction,but it was easy to say but hard to do.I felled down for several times.When I turned around I saw the others were enjoying in the game.I got very angry.So I began to compliant the bad weather and the stupid ground makes me slipped.Tim is my best friends,When I nearly plan to give up,Jim stretched out his hand to me .He held my hand and taught me how to ski for a long time.At last I could do it very well with any help.
Thanks to my friend Tim and my coach.It's a significative day in my lifetimes.When I lose courage and heart I will remember the day.It will give me courage and make me stronger,I believe.
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