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我写的英语作文,求指导
Passage 4 假如你是李华,从小就喜爱大熊猫,一直通过有关网站关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳“和她母亲“白云,现在苏琳即将三岁.请根据以下要点给工作人员写一封信:1.自我介绍2.祝贺苏琳生日3.感谢工作人员4.索取苏琳三岁生日照.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua ,who is a panda lover.
I have paid close attenion to about website three years,and I known the just born parda Sulin and her mother White Cloud.
First of all,happy brith to Sulin.Then,thank of about worker look after them.Finally,I wanted Sulin three years old brithday photos.
I do hope them happy life.
Li Hua
我用的是过去式,麻烦老师们指导下,那些高频的单词,短语该换.
Passage 4 假如你是李华,从小就喜爱大熊猫,一直通过有关网站关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳“和她母亲“白云,现在苏琳即将三岁.请根据以下要点给工作人员写一封信:1.自我介绍2.祝贺苏琳生日3.感谢工作人员4.索取苏琳三岁生日照.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua ,who is a panda lover.
I have paid close attenion to about website three years,and I known the just born parda Sulin and her mother White Cloud.
First of all,happy brith to Sulin.Then,thank of about worker look after them.Finally,I wanted Sulin three years old brithday photos.
I do hope them happy life.
Li Hua
我用的是过去式,麻烦老师们指导下,那些高频的单词,短语该换.
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