【在线等】有谁能帮我修改这（一小段）话吗?英文的

1.这是泰戈尔《飞鸟集》里的原句,把书找出来看了一下,一样的,就是yellow前少了个and.不加也行
Stray birds of summer come to my window to sing and fly away.Yellow leaves of autumn,which have no songs,flutter and fall there with a sign.Eeve time
2.Eeve time（应该是everytime）,when I stand by the wooden barrier of my home's yard watching the grove faraway clamly（far away calmly ）,this is the only immortality （+个of）nature and （这个and去掉）i may share