请你们看看我自己写的这篇英语作文有没有什么地方错了,如果有,请你帮我改正,我正读初一,

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请你们看看我自己写的这篇英语作文有没有什么地方错了,如果有,请你帮我改正,我正读初一,
这里的.是提示内容：1.我家有4口人.有爸爸.妈妈.姐姐和我.2.我爸是警察,他喜欢他的工作,他的工作很危险,但很有趣.3.我妈是护士,我帮助病人(patients）和医生.4.我和姐姐都在第4中学（NO.4Middle School）学习,我们学习很努力,我要像爸爸一样成为一名警察.
自己写的：My Family
My family have four man.have father.mother.sisther and I .My father is a policeman ,he like his work .his work is kind of dangerous ,but very interesting .My mother is a nurse,she help patients and doctors.I am sister is in NO.4Middle School studies,we studies very hard,I want to like father be a policeman.

1个回答分类：英语 2014-10-27

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1.My family have four man改成 My family has four members family 在作为整体时是单数,即译为家庭时是单数,译为家庭成员时为复数. man 这里是人的意思,但是此处应该为复数,men,建议改成member 成员更好.
2.have father.mother.sisther and I 改成namely,my father ,mother,sister and I .要知道一个完整的句子最起码要包含主语跟谓语动词.namely即,也就是 ,这一句与前句合并也可改成My family has four members and includes my father ,mother,sister and me. I 在这句中就改成宾格了,因为在谓语动词后面.
3.he like his work 改成he likes his work .he是第三人称单数,like 也应该相应转换成第三人称单数形式
4.she help patients and doctors改为she helps patients and doctors,she是第三人称单数形式,与he 一样.不过这句可以改成she helps look after ( 照顾)patients and assists（协助）doctors.用she helps patients and doctors也行的
5.I am sister is in NO.4Middle School studies改为My sister and I study in NO.4Middle School. 注意英语翻译中不要直译,首先要找到主语和谓语动词,study就是谓语动词.而且一般谈到几个人中有自己时,往往要把自己放在后面说,出于礼貌.I 应该放在后面说.
6.we studies very hard改为We study very hard .we 是第一人称而且不是一个人,study 不用改单数形式.动词用复数形式的情况I We You They 名词的复数形式teahers students flowers 等等,单数情况he she it 以及名词单数 boy girl box 等等.
7.I want to like father be a policeman.改为I want to be a policeman like my father. like father 放在句尾好一些.
慢慢来,一点一点积累这方面知识,建议你备一本错题集,把所有的错误记在本子上,这样以后碰到类似情况就容易解决了.

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