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Exodus is a piano, from the ancient western regions, with the pianist refers to the flow under the passionate melody, as if we had heard that once prosperous, that was crazy of unbroken, that once TengRan shows, that is still in the whirling dance steps, and the exciting one jiegu, solemn buddhist, amble along the caravan, broken red, deserted city, maverick junichirokoizumi QiBaPi wild horses, three to five cups of red wine, and the continuous hallmarks of castle... The boundless desert has been that hao baptism was desolate. Lean on between white and blue sky, this is how a captivating intoxicate painting, stunning silence. More important is the heart of exciting, yearning for freedom, to the pursuit of no return.
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原文修改如下:Exodus is a piano, from the ancient western regions, with the pianist refers to the flow under the passionate melody, as if we had heard that once prosperous, that was crazy of unbroken, that once TengRan shows, that is still in the whirling dance steps, and the exciting one jiegu, solemn buddhist, amble along the caravan, broken red, deserted city, maverick junichirokoizumi QiBaPi wild horses, three to five cups of red wine, and the continuous hallmarks of castle... The boundless desert has been that hao baptism was desolate. Lean on between white and blue sky, this is how a captivating intoxicate painting, stunning silence. More important is the heart of exciting, yearning for freedom, to the pursuit of no return.
《出埃及记》是一首钢琴曲,来自古老的西域,随着钢琴师指下奔流着激昂的旋律,我们仿佛听到那曾经的繁华,那曾经狂嘶的烈马、那曾经腾然的狼烟、那依然在飞旋的舞步,还有那激奋的羯鼓、肃穆的佛子、缓行的商队,残破的驿道,荒凉的古城,七八匹桀骜不逊的野马,三五杯血红的酒,以及那连绵不断的座座城堡……都已被那浩茫茫的大漠洗礼得苍凉斑驳。倚在白沙与蓝天之间,这是怎样的一幅醉人心魄的画,令人震撼无声。更重要的是人心的振奋,自由的向往,誓死不归的追求。
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