It's summer now.It's very hot.Ben and Kitty go to the Water

问题描述:

It's summer now.It's very hot.Ben and Kitty go to the Water Bay to during this holiday.The weather was hot.So they went swimming in the sea.Next Kitty had a sunshine on the beach and she drank frozen drinks.That was very cool.Then Ben and Kitty played the ball games on the beach.They played happily.In the night,Ben and Kitty went to the balcony to watch stars.The stars were shining and beautiful.Finally they finished the trip.They all enjoyed this holiday.They were happy!
就是这篇文章!老师说让句子更漂亮一些.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-29

问题解答:

我来补答
It's a very hot summer.Ben and Kitty went to the Water Bay to enjoy thenselives during the holiday.The weather was so hot that they went swimming in the sea.Then,Kitty had a sun bath and drank frozen drinks on the beautiful beach.It was so cool!After that,Ben and Kitty played ball games happily on the beach.In the evening,they went to the balcony to watch the shining beautiful stars.In the end,they finished the trip tired but happily.They all enjoyed themselves very much.
希望能给你提供一些思路.句子尽量使用复合句.
因为你是七年级,所以一些从句还没有学.以后学了从句,可以运用在平时的文章中哦~
 
 
展开全文阅读
剩余:2000