问题描述:
高中生作文点评
Dear Tom:
I am happy to write to you ,How about your life in china during this month?I have a good news to tell you that I will leave for Beijing July to join an English speech contest,such a good chance that we can meet together .you know,I miss you very much!
Recently,I am busy in preparing my contest,but there is a trouble that confused me,my speech topic is how to protect our environ mint and I want to make some differences in my artitude.Neverless,there is a few news about it online and the number of them is out of style.Do you have some suggestions that how to build a low carbon city?I will appreciate if you can help me.
At the end of the letter,I hope I can pay a visit to you after the contest and I am looking for ward to you reply!
Yours
Li Hua 请各位在文中用括号标出我的语法和句型错误并给予改正,如果有更好的用法也可以写上,
Dear Tom:
I am happy to write to you ,How about your life in china during this month?I have a good news to tell you that I will leave for Beijing July to join an English speech contest,such a good chance that we can meet together .you know,I miss you very much!
Recently,I am busy in preparing my contest,but there is a trouble that confused me,my speech topic is how to protect our environ mint and I want to make some differences in my artitude.Neverless,there is a few news about it online and the number of them is out of style.Do you have some suggestions that how to build a low carbon city?I will appreciate if you can help me.
At the end of the letter,I hope I can pay a visit to you after the contest and I am looking for ward to you reply!
Yours
Li Hua 请各位在文中用括号标出我的语法和句型错误并给予改正,如果有更好的用法也可以写上,
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