求英语大师修改语法错误

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求英语大师修改语法错误
I'd like to introduce you 3 famous sayings about marriage.The first one was said by famous poet Goethe,he said “Love is an ideal thing, marriage a real thing.”i think he’s right .because When lovers are in love,they are blind in some degree.They tend to ignore many invisible barriers.After they get married,many problems will occur,for example,financial problems,different ideas in baby-sitting and supporting family and so on.So ,before marriage,one should be well-prepared to face the unknown future. The second one was said by Shaquille O’neal,a famous basketball player.he think that “Two secrets to keep your marriage brimming 1. Whenever you're wrong, admit it, 2. Whenever you're right, shut up.”i think he is very rational .do as he says can avoid arguments between couples.The third one is humorous.it says “By all means marry, if u get a good wife, you"ll be happy, if u get a bad one, you"ll become a philosopher”can you guess who the speaker is?let me tell you,he is Socrates.he is a philosopher because his wife is a hellcat.
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I'd like to introduce you 3 famous sayings about marriage.The first one,"Love is an ideal thing; marriage is a real thing" was said by reputable poet Goethe.I think he was correct because people in love tend to selectively ignore invisible barriers.After they get married,however,problems such as finance,baby-sitting,and family supporting may occur.Therefore,before getting married,people should be well prepared to face the unknown future with his/her spouse.A famous basketball player,Shaquille O'neal said my second quote,thinking that "Two secrets to keep your marriage brimming:1.Whenever you're wrong,admit it; 2.Whenever you're right,shut up." I think he is very rational.Behaving according to what he says can avoid arguments between the spouses.Humorous,the third quote is,"By all means marry,if you get a good wife,you'll be happy.If you get a bad one,you'll become a philosopher," said the brilliant Greek philosopher Socrates whose wife was a hellcat.
一个字一个字码出来的啊Q.Q
再问: 谢过,能顺便解释一下改词的原因吗,是用的不准确,还是习惯就是这样的
再问: 能解释一下改的几个词的原因吗?比如把right改成correct
再答: 其实你的词严格来讲都没有用错,但是如果用一些更好的词you can impress your teacher...像你说的把right改成correct,其实right并没错,但是听起来就比correct随便一些了。还有就是复杂句和简单句交错使用会让这篇文章看上去更好。 还有就是我把do改成了behaving是因为do本身是一个动词,不能做主语;当它必须做主语的时候,要变成-ing形式,就是“Doing as he said......”而不能只有“do”在那里。至于为什么换成behave...一样的道理,看上去更impressive 还有那个Humorous,我错了,应该是Humorously. 有问题可以私聊我:) Have a great Thanksgiving!
 
 
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