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一篇英语文章,请大虾们帮忙修改一下,语法错误的,重谢
My view on Shanghai Exposition
Having expected for over several months,I finally had the chance to get there with my friends.Not only felt exciting before the trip that made me nearly insomnia,I’m really eager to see the exhibits showed in the Expo.
It’s a long time for us to get there.Although we set up before five o’clock,we still found it hard to get into any of the pavilion of the large population.After over two hours’ waiting,we enter our first pavilion—the Japan's industrial Museum.Then we felt it really worth for us to get here despite the large population and the hot weather,because the Japan's industrial Museum adopted full computer control technology,and showed huge image which is larger than any of the movie screen in Japan to the audience.They showed their newest technology and their concept of environmental protection.The most thing attract us is that they divided their pavilion into eight parts,very part is just a wonder for us.
Another most interesting pavilion for us is Coke-Cola Pavilion.It’s building looked great,and the Pavilion is a two storey building,the architectural style emphasizes the contrast and color changes and excess,simple and unique.All walls are made of metal storm shutters,painted red,"Coca-Cola".Entering the pavilion,you will see some cartoons about how Coke-Cola is made.It’s invented of course,but the people also promote happy and healthy living styles to people by artful design.At last,they will teach you a small game which shake one kind of their coke to make it frozen.It’s really interesting.
Everything goes smoothly although we didn’t finally enter some hot pavilion such as the Saudi Arabia Pavilion and the Chinese pavilion.I feel the duty we had to construct our country is major.And only by this can made us know the duty.
竞赛的。语法错太多直接被刷了
My view on Shanghai Exposition
Having expected for over several months,I finally had the chance to get there with my friends.Not only felt exciting before the trip that made me nearly insomnia,I’m really eager to see the exhibits showed in the Expo.
It’s a long time for us to get there.Although we set up before five o’clock,we still found it hard to get into any of the pavilion of the large population.After over two hours’ waiting,we enter our first pavilion—the Japan's industrial Museum.Then we felt it really worth for us to get here despite the large population and the hot weather,because the Japan's industrial Museum adopted full computer control technology,and showed huge image which is larger than any of the movie screen in Japan to the audience.They showed their newest technology and their concept of environmental protection.The most thing attract us is that they divided their pavilion into eight parts,very part is just a wonder for us.
Another most interesting pavilion for us is Coke-Cola Pavilion.It’s building looked great,and the Pavilion is a two storey building,the architectural style emphasizes the contrast and color changes and excess,simple and unique.All walls are made of metal storm shutters,painted red,"Coca-Cola".Entering the pavilion,you will see some cartoons about how Coke-Cola is made.It’s invented of course,but the people also promote happy and healthy living styles to people by artful design.At last,they will teach you a small game which shake one kind of their coke to make it frozen.It’s really interesting.
Everything goes smoothly although we didn’t finally enter some hot pavilion such as the Saudi Arabia Pavilion and the Chinese pavilion.I feel the duty we had to construct our country is major.And only by this can made us know the duty.
竞赛的。语法错太多直接被刷了
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