my family 英语作文 语句通顺,字数约50个单词.

I have a happy family.【我有一个幸福的家庭.】
There are five people in our family.They are my parents ,grandparents and me.I'm 11 years old. My father works in tobacco company.And my mother works in bank.My family are very care about me.【我的家人非常关心我】 I love my family.