我写的一篇英语短文,帮忙看看有没有语法错误,或者什么需要改进的地方!

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我写的一篇英语短文,帮忙看看有没有语法错误,或者什么需要改进的地方!
Hi,boys and girls!From 7:30 a.m to 9:00 p.m on Sunday,there is a program in the school hall.The name of the program is "Kung fu Panda".Most people like the program very much and the ticket price is only 15 yuan.Do you want to watch the program?Please come on!
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Hey,guys!there is a movie in our school hall from 7:30 to 9:00 this Sunday.The name is "Kong fu Panda".Most people like it very much and it costs you only 15 yuan to watch.So com on!
 
 
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