问题描述:
请检查一下这段话有没有语法或拼写错误
Hello.My name is Wu Yifei.I'm 13 years old.I study in
No.50 Middle School.I'm in Class 8 ,Grade 7.I love English very much.I can read English books.I can speak Chinese,English and a little Japanese.I can play the guitar.I like chocolate best but I don’t like vegetables.I often do my homework and get information on the computer.I am good at computer.So I think computer is good for us.That is all.Thank you very much.
第二段话.
My oration is Computer helps us.
Computer is our assistant.We can get information on it.If I have some problems then I often use the computer to help me solve the problems.I often do some homework on the computer if it is difficult.I always play computer games twice a week.I usually read news on the computer.I think it is good for me and it is cheaper than newspapers.On the computer,I can download music,visit websites,send emails and so on.So I think computer can help us.
如果有请把原文复制下来之后在错误的地方改正(打括号就可以了),这是我明天参加比赛的演讲稿,如果提点建议会追加分!
那个谢谢两位
但是你们改的话ms有改错的
小左580,动词前面加上be动词,这个动词不能用原型。写作业和获取信息是并列的,我觉得不用改吧?can是情态动词,后面用动词原形。
那个,第一段是自我介绍= =
第二段才是演讲主题= =
Hello.My name is Wu Yifei.I'm 13 years old.I study in
No.50 Middle School.I'm in Class 8 ,Grade 7.I love English very much.I can read English books.I can speak Chinese,English and a little Japanese.I can play the guitar.I like chocolate best but I don’t like vegetables.I often do my homework and get information on the computer.I am good at computer.So I think computer is good for us.That is all.Thank you very much.
第二段话.
My oration is Computer helps us.
Computer is our assistant.We can get information on it.If I have some problems then I often use the computer to help me solve the problems.I often do some homework on the computer if it is difficult.I always play computer games twice a week.I usually read news on the computer.I think it is good for me and it is cheaper than newspapers.On the computer,I can download music,visit websites,send emails and so on.So I think computer can help us.
如果有请把原文复制下来之后在错误的地方改正(打括号就可以了),这是我明天参加比赛的演讲稿,如果提点建议会追加分!
那个谢谢两位
但是你们改的话ms有改错的
小左580,动词前面加上be动词,这个动词不能用原型。写作业和获取信息是并列的,我觉得不用改吧?can是情态动词,后面用动词原形。
那个,第一段是自我介绍= =
第二段才是演讲主题= =
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