Today I read "the ugly duckling" this piece of fairy tales.After reading it,I very:the ugly duckling was a everywhere to be excluded of duck,but it has a wonderful dream,it is the dream to make it indomitable struggle,became a beautiful white swan.In fact,in our real life,how many people is not the little ugly duck?We are students,is the vast learn the sea of the ugly duckling,and the knowledge short and shallow,but we want to have a dream,is determined to get into a famous university,and towards our dream hard effort.We must take the motherland's hope,parents of expectations,to fly to the happy tomorrow!Come on,what's the problem,what sad,what annoyed,throw them,let's open our wings fly!Teacher comment on:the author heart full of ambition,especially reading "the ugly duckling" this article after the fairy tale,feeling more.Don't for his own defects and trouble,as long as the heart to have hope,and the little ugly duck will be ideal.The author USES short text to the readers hope,like the white swan wings to fly as.
今天我读了《丑小鸭》这篇童话故事.读完后,我深有感触：丑小鸭是一只处处受排挤的鸭子,但它却怀有一份美好的梦想,正是这份梦想让它不屈的奋斗,成了一只美丽的白天鹅.实际上,在我们的现实生活中,有多少人不是丑小鸭呢?我们是学生,是茫茫学海里的丑小鸭,知识短浅,但我们要拥有梦想,立志考上一所名牌大学,并朝着我们的梦想努力的拼搏.我们一定能带着祖国的希望,父母的期盼,飞向美好的明天!来吧,什么难题,什么伤心,什么懊恼,抛开它们,让我们张开翅膀飞起来吧!名师点评：作者心中充满了雄心壮志,特别是在读了《丑小鸭》这篇童话故事后,感触更深.不要为自己的缺陷而烦恼,只要心中有希望,就一定和丑小鸭一样会实现理想.作者用简短的文字给了读者希望,要像白天鹅一样张开翅膀去飞翔.
