I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on

问题描述:

I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on me. 这句话是对的吗?
I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on me.
如果不对 请告诉我怎么改?
谢谢.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-02

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I enjoy the beauty of the sky and the warmth of the sunshine.
我感觉这样改一下会比较好啦.结构要对称的.
 
 
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