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开篇加个A.have改成there is.alone live 改成 living alone.in改成on."a" 和 "one"去掉一个. He live there already have three years改成He had lived there for three years already. why 和 he 中间加个 does. in there 可以删除.he改成his.travel加ed放在by的前边."en"是什么.打错了吗.sudden改成suddenly.one改成something放在suddenly后边.后边那句改成The boat was hit by an ocean wave and broken. was改成were.
on改成passed吧.all along放在句末. don't改成doesn't.method前要加a后边加to放在have后边.然后：So he can only wait and hope for someone to come to this island that can help him leave this place.
中文砸着英文很乱.总体改编后是这样：
A long time ago, there is an old man living alone on a no man's island. He had lived there for three years already. And then why does he live here? Because three years ago, the old man and his wife traveledd by boat, suddenly something unexpected happened, the boat was hit by an ocean wave and broken. So he and his wife were scattered.
Three years passed, he missed his family so much all along. But he doesn't have a method to leave this island, so he can only wait and hope for someone to come to this island that can help him leave this place.
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