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Computer and me
Hi!Everyone!My English name is Omeil and Chinese name is Mai Sibei.I’m ten year old.My favouride color is blue.My dad and mom are teacher.I come from the Min Yuan primary school.
I like computers because I like playing computer games.It very funny,and computers can help me to learn well.It can chat with my friend.It can give me a lot of knowledge.The computers are my good friend.
But the computers have two sides.A good aspeats and a bad aspeats.If I play computers everyday,my glasses well be thicker and thicker.And it can “help” me have some work on the weekend.My pocket money will be flies away.So,we should play the good aspeats of computers,through the net to learn more outside the humanities and social knowledge.
I must study my computer very hard ,because computer is very useful and it is very important ,well enough to make some friends from different schools.It can make our colorful life.
That’s all ,thanks for listening.
Computer and me
Hi!Everyone!My English name is Omeil and Chinese name is Mai Sibei.I’m ten year old.My favouride color is blue.My dad and mom are teacher.I come from the Min Yuan primary school.
I like computers because I like playing computer games.It very funny,and computers can help me to learn well.It can chat with my friend.It can give me a lot of knowledge.The computers are my good friend.
But the computers have two sides.A good aspeats and a bad aspeats.If I play computers everyday,my glasses well be thicker and thicker.And it can “help” me have some work on the weekend.My pocket money will be flies away.So,we should play the good aspeats of computers,through the net to learn more outside the humanities and social knowledge.
I must study my computer very hard ,because computer is very useful and it is very important ,well enough to make some friends from different schools.It can make our colorful life.
That’s all ,thanks for listening.
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