初一的英语小作文,麻烦帮忙修改一下

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初一的英语小作文,麻烦帮忙修改一下
I want to be a writer
I want to be a writer when i grow up,because i like reading books.Books can make me feel happy or excited.And i wang to write some books for readers.So that,i will feel successful and readers can feel happy,too.
If one day i die,These books will be my wealth.I should do some things when i am alive.So i want to be a writer to minute my lives.
But it is difficult to be a writer.However,i won't give up.I will write some article from now on.I think i should start out small.Then i can find it is valuable for me.
……好像很多不对呢……
article是否可数呢?(⊙_⊙)?
麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误O(∩_∩)O谢谢
还有：
【我会为我的理想努力奋斗的】也麻烦翻译一下~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
O(∩_∩)O谢谢麻烦了【写的不好请原谅】
【如果可以的话,最好有讲解】

1个回答分类：英语 2014-10-25

问题解答：

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'some article' 加-s
Then i can find it is valuable for me.去掉is更好
some things 换为something
my lives 改为单数
Books can make me feel happy or excited.改为Books can lighten my world.
I will study hard to achieve my dream.
or 改为 and
so that 改为 in this way
start out small 是中式英语英语中没有这样的表达删掉这句话或者
改为start from now on
article 在这里加S（有时不加你要好好了解它的用法还有其他很多意思）
if one day i die 改为 if i die one day
1.wang 改为want
2.,too去掉,有点多余
3.for readers.So that,i will feel 改为for readers so that i can feel
4.If one day i die改为If i die one day
5.some things 改为something
6.my lives改为my live
7.some article 改为some articles
8.start out small.改为starts from the mino

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