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Topic:Some people think that development in technology is causing environmental problems,while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views.
In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-the-art facilities in daily life,which is regarded as bread and butter as well.While,when these facilities bring about convenience to people,they also bring on environmental problems at the same time.
Protection of the environment is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern in many places of the world.In order to reduce the high technology impact on environmental pollution,some people advocate that it is better for people to start a new lifestyle,which is without any kind of electronic products,plastic products and so on.For instance,communication technology makes people meet with each other fewer.So,they think if life they do like green lifestyle,they will meet friends more often ,as well as become cheerful and sociability rather than only sit in front of the computer or just use mobile phone to chat ,then they have no longer to trouble about how to let these useless electronic products destory for not polluting the environment.
However,other people indicated that people can also use high technology to solve these problems.To put it simply,it is possible for people to create a kind of machine,which could decompose the plastic,so that environmental pollution will no more be a problem.and then people could use time and money more effectively and efficiently with high technology in this ever-increasingly crowded and complicated world,if only people reach a balance between technology and environment.
So overall,my view is that the problem of environmental protection has reached this state.The fewer technology we use,the better protection we do.
语法错误?逻辑不通?怎么改进?
In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-the-art facilities in daily life,which is regarded as bread and butter as well.While,when these facilities bring about convenience to people,they also bring on environmental problems at the same time.
Protection of the environment is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern in many places of the world.In order to reduce the high technology impact on environmental pollution,some people advocate that it is better for people to start a new lifestyle,which is without any kind of electronic products,plastic products and so on.For instance,communication technology makes people meet with each other fewer.So,they think if life they do like green lifestyle,they will meet friends more often ,as well as become cheerful and sociability rather than only sit in front of the computer or just use mobile phone to chat ,then they have no longer to trouble about how to let these useless electronic products destory for not polluting the environment.
However,other people indicated that people can also use high technology to solve these problems.To put it simply,it is possible for people to create a kind of machine,which could decompose the plastic,so that environmental pollution will no more be a problem.and then people could use time and money more effectively and efficiently with high technology in this ever-increasingly crowded and complicated world,if only people reach a balance between technology and environment.
So overall,my view is that the problem of environmental protection has reached this state.The fewer technology we use,the better protection we do.
语法错误?逻辑不通?怎么改进?
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