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There are three people in my family,my father,my mother and me.My name is Ye Dan,I am 21 years old today,now in a school,I like surfing the Internet and shopping.My father in a working station,he is 49 years old this year,he likes to read novels online.My mother is a company 's accounting,she is 46 years old this year,her work very tired,but she insisted,she liked watching movies on the Internet,she always take care of we are one family life.I love my mom and Dad,because their daily hard work is for me,so I want to be a good child,
There are three people in my family,my father,my mother and me.My name is Ye Dan,I am 21 years old today,now in a school,I like surfing the Internet and shopping.My father in a working station,he is 49 years old this year,he likes to read novels online.My mother is a company 's accounting,she is 46 years old this year,her work very tired,but she insisted,she liked watching movies on the Internet,she always take care of we are one family life.I love my mom and Dad,because their daily hard work is for me,so I want to be a good child,
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