大家帮我看看,我这样的英语算是什么水平,自己写的~

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大家帮我看看,我这样的英语算是什么水平,自己写的~
Dear Ms Joan,
I am very glad to receive the telephone that you call me today to give me an opportunity for an interview.At first ,let me interduce myself .I am a college student that just graduate from a collage ,The collage is in Hangzhou which is located at Wensan Rode.I spent three years at school studying many courses,and my major is International Trade.It include about fourteen courses,such as Business English,Business law ,Computer,Accounting and Marketing.My hobby is sports,for example basketball and badminton.,because sports can make me in health.Although I have no practical experience,I once practice in Yuhang Internaional Co.,Ltd.during my summer holiday.I am interested in doing internaional trade,because it is so challenging.I know that when do international trade ,English is very very important.But for some reasons ,I even have't got any certificate abour English.I hope you would give me a chance.I will work hard,study hard from beginning.You can call me at anyt time,This is my telephone 1301234567.
因为我英语没有考过等级什么的，对自己没底，不是显摆~---不知道这个水平做外贸助理会行不行！确实我对自己的评估是没达到四级~就帮我评估，

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Dear Ms Joan,
It is my great pleasure to talk to you over the phone today.Your invitation for an interview is very much appreciated.
Please allow me to take this opportunity to brief you about myself.I am a new graduate from XXX college,(located on Wensan Road,HangZhou City.) (觉得没必要说学校在哪里) majoring in International Trade.In the 3 years of my study I successfully completed 14 courses,some of which are Business English,Business law,Computer,Accounting,and Marketing,just to say a few.The internship with Yuhang International Co.,Ltd.Further enhanced my knowledge gained from books and provided me with a real-life scenario of this challenging field.I am well aware that the level of English plays a key role in this position.However,without any certificate in English,I can hardly prove myself in terms of my English proficiency.I will endeavor to improve my English,to learn the professionalism in this industry.I am sure my hardworking and determination in achieving a goal will support me through any hardship of a job I may encounter should a chance is provided.
My personal spare time interest is sports and I would very much like to be a welcome part in your company’s social activities if I am lucky enough to work with you.
I can be reached at 1301234567.

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