请帮忙看一下这个英文简历中的自我评价有无问题

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请帮忙看一下这个英文简历中的自我评价有无问题
Self-evaluation:
I’m integrity,easy-going and with pleasant personality.Have positive work attitude.
Work seriously and sense of responsibility.Good ability to learn,Ican accept and understand the new things quickly.
Ability to work well with others.Good communication skill.
I love the wonderful things.The color colloceation of clothes I have own opinion,a higher-quality of requirement for clothes
I concern about the fashion trend,whereas for fashion I have own view.
这是我刚写的简历的自我评价部分,写完就觉怪怪的~第一次写英文的,请帮忙指出改正
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-12-11

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你写的这个问题好像比较严重,我看了你的大体意思,给了一个差不多的:
I am a totally committed individual with pride in being direct,spontaneous,and communicative.
Accepting challenges is the foundation of my lige experiences and something I do with confidence.
Besides,I have the quickness of mind and efficency to complete assigned tasks on time.
From past experience and education,I have acquired persuasive techniques that are needed for a company.My teamwork skill are developed and have allowed me to corperate with different kinds of people.
I also have a special talent for matching clothes,and I am always highly sensitive to colours and fashion.
如果没有篇幅限制,你最好能简要地加进你的个人经历来印证你的自我评价,因为只是自夸给人一种口说无凭的感觉.
我是英语专业的,大四了,楼主请对我的英语水平放心.
请楼主给分吧,我可是一个字一个字敲出来的哦!而且全部是我个人原创,不必担心撞车~
 
 
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