问题描述:
请耐心的高手纠错
如下列文章:
Dear Toby:
How are you Did you know how my last day off was?Ok,let me tell you :
It was a very good weather that day -----sunny and hot ,so I thought,that is a good day to go swimming with friends.But when I called my friends ,my parents syied "You should finish your homework first!".So ,I had to stay at home to do my awful homework,and I did and did so long time .I still remember:in the morning ,I did it ; in the afternoon ,I did it ;
in the evening ,I still did it!How much homework did I need to do It really likes a big mountain!And I think I can't stand the life like this ,because it makes me so tired .
At last,I hope you have good days off ,and don't like me .
yours,Bob
这是初中的习作,请各位找找错,不说主题如何,就说语法和单词(有无错误),星期一是交的,怕出错,请各位指教,并尽快.
如下列文章:
Dear Toby:
How are you Did you know how my last day off was?Ok,let me tell you :
It was a very good weather that day -----sunny and hot ,so I thought,that is a good day to go swimming with friends.But when I called my friends ,my parents syied "You should finish your homework first!".So ,I had to stay at home to do my awful homework,and I did and did so long time .I still remember:in the morning ,I did it ; in the afternoon ,I did it ;
in the evening ,I still did it!How much homework did I need to do It really likes a big mountain!And I think I can't stand the life like this ,because it makes me so tired .
At last,I hope you have good days off ,and don't like me .
yours,Bob
这是初中的习作,请各位找找错,不说主题如何,就说语法和单词(有无错误),星期一是交的,怕出错,请各位指教,并尽快.
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