Dear Li Ming,
I heard that you had some problems in learning English.Firstly,you can't quite understad when others speaking English sometimes.Then,you always forget the new words you learnt and you are afraid of writing compositions.What's more,you just can't avoid making Grammar mistakes.
Now I try to give you some advice and I hope they can work.When others are speaking English,you just need to get what the whole sentence mean but not try to translate every word.And the more important is that you should practice the new words often.Also,you'd better to make a pen pal and ask your teachers and classmates for help.
At last,I hope you will make progress when I hear from you next time.
再问： 开头已经给了 Dear Li Ming, I know it's not easy for you to learn English , but I have some sdvice that may help you.________________________________________________________
再答： Firstly,you can't quite understad when others speaking English sometimes.The key to solve the problem is that you just need to get what the whole sentence mean but not try to translate every word.Then,you always forget the new words you learnt.So you should practice the new words as frequently as possible. When talkig about that you are afraid of writing compositions,you'd better to make a pen pal .What's more,you have to ask your teachers and classmates for help in order to avoid making Grammar mistakes. At last,I hope you will make progress when I hear from you next time.
再问： 字数够吗
再答： 这位同学，字数够不够可以自己数，另外，你自己可以适当增删
