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英语作文评论 ,我写的不是很好.
Shopping on the Net
Nowadays,more and more people become lazy and rich; in addition,surf the Internet is become more and more popular.So that some people like shopping on the Net.
People hold different opinions on that.Some think that shopping on the net is very convenient.First of all,we haven’t to go to the market tiredly and then the service staff will send to your home with present like a star.Secondly,on the net have all kinds of goods,you can go shopping with reckless abandon.Last but not least,the goods prices online is cheaper than market.
However,some other people hold that shopping `on the net is harmful to people.In the first place,people look at the goods online may be is not really,in other worlds,it is picture and may be quality is not good.In the second place,on the net have a few frauds.You give him or her some money for your goods that pitch on the net.But you don’t gain it.As a result,shopping on the net is not safe.
In my opinion,this question should be probed in depth.But form what has been discussed above,we can see clearly that the most important thing for us shopping on the net the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages,because now more and more website are more comprehensive for shopping on the net.
Shopping on the Net
Nowadays,more and more people become lazy and rich; in addition,surf the Internet is become more and more popular.So that some people like shopping on the Net.
People hold different opinions on that.Some think that shopping on the net is very convenient.First of all,we haven’t to go to the market tiredly and then the service staff will send to your home with present like a star.Secondly,on the net have all kinds of goods,you can go shopping with reckless abandon.Last but not least,the goods prices online is cheaper than market.
However,some other people hold that shopping `on the net is harmful to people.In the first place,people look at the goods online may be is not really,in other worlds,it is picture and may be quality is not good.In the second place,on the net have a few frauds.You give him or her some money for your goods that pitch on the net.But you don’t gain it.As a result,shopping on the net is not safe.
In my opinion,this question should be probed in depth.But form what has been discussed above,we can see clearly that the most important thing for us shopping on the net the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages,because now more and more website are more comprehensive for shopping on the net.
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