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题目是Some movies are serious,designed to make the audience think.Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain.Which type of movie do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer..
Now movies is a very important part of our daily life.There are many types of movie.But each of them make you feel different.Some people is fascinated by the movies which make us think.While others,on the contrary,prefer to see the movies only for entertainment.As my point of view.I’d like to see the serious movies.
The very important reason is that this kind of movies may be can help you find the right way and the right answer when you feel confused.For example.i was born in a basketball family.There was always a dream keep in my mind:to be a bastetball superstar.But things changed because of a match in my high school.Our team was beaten.Completely lose.A terrible concept came up to my mind:give up.when I turned on the DVD player.The movie just be played.It is tell us a story about a boy who persist on the music dream.While I was seeing this movie.i just reminiscing every challenge I faced in the past time.Finally i find the confidence again.And I think i will never reject basketball.
Equally significant reason is the serious movies can sometime teach you something you can’t learn in the class.If you ever see the movie .You can know people’s facial expression always mean different.For instance.There are many kinds of frown.Not all the frown show anger.It can also means scorn.what you can never know from your daily classes.
Matching the two reasons is another essential factor that the movie make us think can affect a lot of people even the whole society.The very famous movieis about a cute girl who is possessed by the demon of disease.With the help of many benevolent people,finally,she recover from the troublesome disease.At the year of this movie be showed.Hundreds of thousands of people do their best to help the sepcial group that really need everyone to regard.Such as physically-challenged people.At that time.The whole community was full of love.
On the basis of my experience and the above-mentioned reasons.The conclusion can be drew.the movies which are serious and designed is more useful for our lifes or even more.So I prefer to watch this type of movies.
这字数会不会太多了?第一个理由的例子的叙述会不会太长?最好有什么错误的地方能帮我提一下～大概能得几分?感激不尽啊!
题目是Some movies are serious,designed to make the audience think.Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain.Which type of movie do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer..
Now movies is a very important part of our daily life.There are many types of movie.But each of them make you feel different.Some people is fascinated by the movies which make us think.While others,on the contrary,prefer to see the movies only for entertainment.As my point of view.I’d like to see the serious movies.
The very important reason is that this kind of movies may be can help you find the right way and the right answer when you feel confused.For example.i was born in a basketball family.There was always a dream keep in my mind:to be a bastetball superstar.But things changed because of a match in my high school.Our team was beaten.Completely lose.A terrible concept came up to my mind:give up.when I turned on the DVD player.The movie just be played.It is tell us a story about a boy who persist on the music dream.While I was seeing this movie.i just reminiscing every challenge I faced in the past time.Finally i find the confidence again.And I think i will never reject basketball.
Equally significant reason is the serious movies can sometime teach you something you can’t learn in the class.If you ever see the movie .You can know people’s facial expression always mean different.For instance.There are many kinds of frown.Not all the frown show anger.It can also means scorn.what you can never know from your daily classes.
Matching the two reasons is another essential factor that the movie make us think can affect a lot of people even the whole society.The very famous movieis about a cute girl who is possessed by the demon of disease.With the help of many benevolent people,finally,she recover from the troublesome disease.At the year of this movie be showed.Hundreds of thousands of people do their best to help the sepcial group that really need everyone to regard.Such as physically-challenged people.At that time.The whole community was full of love.
On the basis of my experience and the above-mentioned reasons.The conclusion can be drew.the movies which are serious and designed is more useful for our lifes or even more.So I prefer to watch this type of movies.
这字数会不会太多了?第一个理由的例子的叙述会不会太长?最好有什么错误的地方能帮我提一下～大概能得几分?感激不尽啊!
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